CBLA-InComps Episode Zero – The Writer’s Cut

This is the original version of Episode 1 – The Port Menace. I prefer this version because it is actually closer to my own sense of humor. The final cut missed more  plot absurdity, Doc Spinolee, and reference to some local characters. Any guesses on who Madi, Sir Joe Spamsalot, Zippy, Ms. Lied-Toomey, or  Snoopy are?

FYI - The picture was actually taken inside the sewage treatment centre with a bit of Photoshop magic added by Madi.

Excerpt: Under cover of night, the CBLA-InComps team mistakenly broke into the local sewage treatment facility assuming that they were sneaking into City Hall. It was an honest mistake. Ali, an international student studying engineering and global positioning systems (GPS) at the local university, volunteered to lead the team to their assigned target. English was Ali’s second language, so he may have taken Dr. StrangeJob’s directive too literally when asked to, “get us into the big building on the waterfront where we can release all the #@#@ we can find on the Port file.”  

It wasn’t all Ali’s fault. As the leader of the group, Dr. StrangeJob should have known he was in the wrong building. Unfortunately, the Doctor doesn’t get out much and has no sense of direction. In fact, the last time he was in the actual city hall dated back to the mid-70’s when the drunk tank was housed in the basement.

Read the uncensored version of the writer's cut or the original CBLA-InComps here.

https://drstrangejob.ca/2017/07/12/cbla-incomps-episode-zero-the-writers-cut/

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Dan Yakimchuk My Post Follow Me
I am warding off the temptation to suggest who Sir Joe Spamsalot is based on and will not Speculate on the Snoopy character until next Wednesday.
Dan Yakimchuk My Post Follow Me
Who is Doc Spinolee? Hint: He is a close friend of Dr. StrangeJob who is currently helping Dr. StrangeJob with self-esteem issues. In fact, Dr. StrangeJob is on his way to visit Doc Spinolee to discuss Spinolee's role in the next InComps adventure, code named "Let them eat flowers".
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wow, that is a lot of comments! :-)

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